Thursday, September 23, 2010
Punch vs. Words
Do you guys/girls think words hurt more than a punch? Or do you guys/girls believe that a punch hurts more than words? Because I believe that words hurt way more than a punch. I mean seriously a punch might hurt you but just for a minute not like in the other side words will always and forever will be their. Is like my scars every time you’ll remember or see them it hurts because you remember what happen. I been hit so much by life and by people that it doesn’t even hurt no more. But when I comes to someone that I love who tells me something some really hard words it does hurt me. And it will always stay their till the day that you die.
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6 comments:
man this is so true i feel the same way. i would much rather get puched in the face then get in a word battle. cas words can stick with you for life. good work man
peace.
-Improve by rereading it a couple of times.
-You had great ways to prove your point and keep readers entertained.
-I believe what you are saying is true, (for me at least).
I agree with you, I think words hurt more than a punch does, sometimes it can be a decision whether or not for someone to keep their life also. You can work on your wording a bit, but over all i think you did a good job.
i think you should work on your grammer. you did great on telling them how you feel.
you did good you made it sound like you were telling people your self.
you should of read threw it twice because you missed spelled some words.
i been hit so many times to and it dont hurt and some times i look back at my scares and it reminds me when my dad hit me.
Yeah I think words hurt more because my abdopted mom who is not really my mom she will say that I'm not that pretty like my real mom and that will always put me down.
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