My mom is kind, loving and caring. She adopted nine kids including me! All of us really didn’t have any where else to go at the time. So I’m glad she opened up her heart to us when everyone else turned their backs on us.
Our mom really tried to take care of us. Now she’s trying really hard to get us back into the family. And now we only have ninety days till they decide if we go home or not. This in my opinion means she deserves a lot of respect for how hard she tried.
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I LIKE HOW U START OUT AND STUFF BUT U SHOULD START EXPLAINING A LITTLE MORE AND NOT GO STRATE POINT.
BUT OTHER THAN THAT MAN UR GOOD AND I LIKE HOW U MAKE HER SOUND IS LIKE A HERO HU?
I KINDA CAN RELATE TO THAT BECAUSE WHEN I WAS YOUNGER I WAS GOIN TO BE TAKING AWAY FROM MY FAMILY JUST FOR SOME DUMB STUFF.
ALFREDO GUTIERREZ
I like how you express your feelings for you mom. I know I would i Love my mom unconditionally. You grammar could improve a little bit.
I'm happy that you have a great foster mom. So many kids don't get put into homes where they are really loved by their foster families. You are incredibly lucky.
I can relate to that my grand parents took me in because my mom did not wont me. I love your title it got my attention.
-How you can improve on it would be to probably make it longer so you can actually add more info to it.
-I like your title and what you said. I can tell that you are actually are greatful.
- I totally agree with you.
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