“Hello? Mom, Guess what? I get to come home for a visit.” I said into the receiver to my mother. I was so excited to be able to come home and see my family.
“That’s great sweet-heart, what time do I need to pick you up?” my mother said to me as I asked my staff what was the best time. I then relayed the time to my mother.
Calmly and very suspiciously I asked my mother in a soft whisper “Mom make sure Ash comes with okay mom?”
“Don’t worry Hun I’ll make sure she comes,” my mother assured me. Then the line went dead, and I went to my room to get ready for the day of my biggest decision ever. I was so excited but at the same time, I was scared that what would happen if it wouldn’t go as I planned.
“Are you excited to go see your family Cody?” my staff asked me as I got ready to go to church. “Hell yeah I am why wouldn’t I be?” I asked questioningly. After church I went back to my room and was waiting very anxiously for my mother to arrive.
“Hey sweetie, are you ready to go?” asked my mother, as she checked me out of the place I was staying at, which in all consideration was a rhetorical question that I didn’t answer as we climbed into the truck to go to my home. The ride home was very short but quiet like my mom and dad were plotting some grand scheme.
“Hey babe” I said as I swept me girlfriend into my arms and embracing her with a big long warm hug and then released her and kissed her perfectly soft and beautiful lips.
“I’ve missed you so much babe,” my girlfriend said to me as my best friend walked up to me and embraced me in a friendly hug.
When we got inside we went to the living room and sat on the couch as my girlfriend cuddled right up next to me with the rest of my family around us, who were waiting to hear about what I had been up to for the past couple of months.
After a while we migrated to the kitchen for my girlfriends surprise birthday party, which she found out a couple of days before hand. We had some cake and mingled amongst ourselves tell each other what we have been up to for the past little while. When everyone started heading back to the living room I hollered at everyone.
“Wait Ash hasn’t open her presents yet” I said eagerly, stopping everyone in there tracks and they turned around and looked at me questioningly.
“Wait present? What present? I didn’t see anyone bring any presents in.” she asked as she looked around at everyone shaking there heads, until she met my eyes and realized I was on one knee with a little blue box.
“We have been through a lot the past few years there’s been pain, smiles, laughter, tears, but most of all there has always been love, Ashlie, I love you with all my heart and I want you to know that I want you, and only you, I want all of you forever and always. So now Ashlie Amanda Hansen, will you marry me?” as I opened the box and waited for her to answer. She suddenly broke into tears and smiled and said through all the emotion as hard as she could.
“Yes, yes forever I love you Cody, I would be happy to marry you.” As I slipped the ring onto her finger as she jumped on me and embraced me in another hug and locking her lips onto mine with a kiss. I felt overwhelmed and felt like my heart would burst out from my chest from the love I felt.
5 comments:
ive been through this just this last month or two i was whith my boyfriend daniel and we were in his room and i was just drawing in his black book than he came up to me and he got on his knee and hes like anastasia chadwick will you marry me and i thought he was jk and he wasnt so i was like really happy i couldnt even think of what to do. we have beenthrough so much together these last 3 years hes been here with me through everything even being so far away from me he comes to see me every weeend i really like your stroyalot its really cute and touching.
Cody you did really good, it sounded like your visit went vary well, just like you planned, i have never been through this but from the look of it your happy with your lady. Your family sounds great, keep up the good work and you'll be home soon.
The whole home visit thing was great and how you asked her to marry you knowing you both had love between each other and the more you want to bee with her you will find out you would stop doing all the bad things just to be with her.
i can relate to this because last year on thanksgiving i lost the one person who was there every time i got in trouble or was down
that is a pretty good story and i was into it right away. good job and i think you improved a lot from the last one you wrote. it has really good grammar and a good beginning, well for me atleast. yeah.
Post a Comment