It was getting late and the kids were getting fussy, I got the bambinos fed, washed and into bed.
He worked late evenings from 8:00p.m. To 3:00a.m. It felt like I never had time with him anymore. When he got off work all he did was eat sleep and go back to work.
I read a book then fall asleep. At three twenty seven a.m. he woke me up with the softest kiss and told me he had something he wanted to show me.
For a moment I was angry, but at the same time I knew he wouldn’t wake me for nothing.
I felt the cold still lingering from around his body from coming in from the cold.
He took me by the hand, up the stares, and rushed me towards the living room window, quickly and quietly so we wouldn’t wake the baby’s.
“He told me to close my eyes” I was hesitant at first, and then I thought to myself “he so bought me a new car”. He opened the window then said to me “open your eyes”.
It was the most adorable thing, and it made up for all the times he didn’t have time for me. There were about seven deer in the street and in our yard they were all equally beautiful.
They were running around in our front yard and looked as if they were playing tag under the moon light.
The sky was a dark, smoky blue. The moon was full and the light was reflecting from the moon to the freshly fallen snow, it was beautiful.
The deer and the weather made it perfect.
The snow, the moon and the stars all together made it even more romantic, almost like a fairy tail. We stared at the scene I could feel him watching me, I whispered “their beautiful.” He smiled and said “I think you’re beautiful.”
Back then I thought that we were perfect. Now my thought is blank. From then on, I left the sweet memories that I held in my heart to treasure, behind me and decided to make myself a promise for my own good; the word (LOVE), the emotion (LOVE), that tight annoying felling in you throat and the butterflies in your tummy (LOVE) will never be excepted in this cold dark heart of mine again.
5 comments:
great story. love the romantic scene. it reminds me of the days me and my fiance would lay outside under the stars and watch the sky pass us by. at the same time i wanted to know what happens next. how does it end? does he break up with you are you guys still together.
It sounded like the most wonderful time of your life but did you guys break up or are you still together? but other than that it was a very good story to tell.
nah it all ended in an accident; "quoted". well i left him, and he decided that if he cant have me then no one can. he tried to kill me literally, but i aint going down by the hands of a man no not that easy. you know me. i got him first jejeje!
I like this girl. I bet this was so romantic for you, But i bet i ts hard for you not having him, and your Lil babies but you know what Latoya keep your head up, don't mess up just because you don't have what you've always loved. At least you can still see them. I like this you did a good job on it, i liked how you expressed your self.
that is pretty awesome, i like those kind of moments. too bad he didn't buy you a car too, but that is still pretty cool. good job on your story and good grammar. i enjoyed reading it.
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