Friday, April 1, 2011

Speak

I would describe as a nice person but nobody knows that and they think she is a snitch and that’s the reason why they are mean to her.

I think the teacher the teacher she will bond with is the art teacher because he seems like a nice guy and Melinda wants a way to express herself so she will probably use this class to express the way she feels.

The teacher she dislikes the most is Mr. Neck because he knows her from before and thinks she is trouble and it’s only the first day of school and he is already giving her grief.

Melinda’s and Heathers do not have a real friendship because Melinda is using Heather to get friends because nobody likes Melinda so pretty much she doesn’t even like Heather but Heather is just being a friend to Melinda because she is looking for an actual friend she is not using Melinda.

Melinda has a bad relationship with her family because the way they communicate is stupid they use notes as a form of communication and the way I would compare this to Heathers family is Heather is really close to her parents and family so I would imagine that their communication skills are pretty good.

6 comments:

jesus v said...

I do agree with your blog because i think she will connect with her teacher.I don't see any mistakes you made i think you did a good job with connecting

Dusty said...

I don't particularly agree due to perception of someone who has never been in this situation. However, it is true that Melinda's communication skills are not very good. But can you even imagine what she has been through? This is a good blog though.

Tanner said...

I think you should make it a little longer, so you can write more. Make your paragraphs more organized. Other than that you did good.

jesus v said...

I agree. I think that Melinda needs to start standing up for herself because she never says anything at all. Like when her classmates told her in spanish that she was ugly she didn't even tell them to stop. She definitly needs to do something different.

mimi said...

i agree with you. Melinda is a nice girl but people don't know that so yeah that's why they are mean to her. they just need to accept her and get to know her before they judge her.

Tawnie M said...

I think that you could have put more thought in to what you were writing. I do agree with the fact that Mr. Neck is the teacher she dislikes. She ‘ran’ from him and headed in to the Senior part of the school.