Friday, April 1, 2011


            I think that Melinda is drawing the pictures of the tree being struck by lightning to show how she feels about the abuse she is experiencing both inside and outside. Inside because she dealing with the emotions from being raped and from the emotions of her friends making fun of her. And outside through the physical and verbal abuse of her friends through being kicked, pushed around, and ignored also through being verbally assaulted. There’s also the fact that Melinda is struggling to find herself after being raped and is struggling to find a way to tell people.

            I think that Melinda is hurt in more ways than one because like I said she was raped and is struggling to find a way to tell people this, also her getting made fun of. She is also struggling to deal with loosing all her friends and this picture is representing that she wants to scream out her emotions.

9 comments:

Kyley said...

I really like this blog. Because it is totally true. I feel really bad for her.

cody said...

Abuse of her friends if it were me I'd reword it and maybe insert like aquaintances or peers instead of friends because they realy aren't friends. You should use less repetition, you use the example of how she was raped likefour times se other details and examples.

Dusty said...

Very repetitive. Although very good perception of the draawing.

Tanner said...

There were a few grammar mess-ups. Fluency and proper words would work. Other than that, I think it's good.
Good job.

Dusty said...

Very repetitve. Although I think that this is a very good perception of the drawing. I agree.

jesus v said...

nice job alex i totally agree with wat ur saying no errors i think this is the best one

mimi said...

i agree with you. i do think that she is expressing how she feels in the picture. both inside and out.

Tawnie M said...

Alex,
Hey I Think that you put it right on target because the tree can represent her and here growth as a human being. The lightning can represent some out side for that is pushing her aback or that I not letting her grow and learn on her own. The blog you wrote is right on target and I think that you showed a lot of passion for what you were writing.

Alfredo S Gtz said...

I like how u get all detailed about it that's big props you did really good and i agree with you about why she did it.

Alfredo S Gtz