Tuesday, May 31, 2011
The Creation of the World
It all started with pear darkness, the hole world was empty there was no humans, no animals, and no plants. The world was just another planet just like the others. One day they was a terrible accident between two planets. The planets crashed into each other, when the crashed happen a powerful light source was created. The Light had incredible powers it had the ability to fly and to move so fast that you would be able to see with the human sight. When the light was created it had no where to go it was just wondering out in space. One day the light ended up on the planet we now call earth. On the planet earth there was nothing it was completely empty, soon as the light hit earth. The light had the power to create the sky, the light decided to make the sky blue, after creating the sky the light also created land. The Earth was begging to make its shape, everything look so peaceful and calm that it seemed like paradise. As time went by the light kept on creating things like the sun, plant, animals and mountains. Humans were created by the light, the light first created a woman name Hennessy and a man name Gio. Hennessy and Gio considered the light as a god for creating them and creating the things around them. They both started worshipping the amazing power that the light had. Awhile after the two humans were created the light decided to go up to the universe and make a place were people could go after their life time is over. Soon as the light created the place called heaven the light became the shape of a human. While on Earth the two humans that were created by the light, they kept on duplicating until there was a lot f their kind. The humans had the ability to create things but not like the light. Their way of creating things was by using their brains and their hands, and working together as a team. Gio and Hennessy started teaching the other human beans about the light and how they worship it like a God. As time past human develop more on the way they live and the things they had, the light was up in heaven watching the humans and seeing the rights and wrongs from the humans,
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3 comments:
It seems as though you put a lot of thought into this. Good job. I like this.
i really enjoyed reading your comment i like how you made story because it was like if you were telling a moving...i think you did a great job.
i like this but there were no periods to end a sentence they just went on and stop at some part next time add more detail and punction
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