Tuesday, May 31, 2011

God Creation

Once upon a time their was a goddess named Anya. Anya is the goddess of peace. She is a very kind and gentle person who can take any kind of threat or insult and not be insulted or angry. She is the kind of god who can make everything beautiful even when its at the ugliest she always has a way to make it beautiful. Their was also an evil mastermind named Zoloff. He is the ruler of all evilness and makes people suffer. He is the scariest of all scariness. You do not want to piss him off. Or else…

Once, land before land, time before time, before man roamed the earth, their was a evil mastermind named Zoloff who loves to see people suffer. If you do anything to piss him off he will have you killed and will make you suffer so bad that you wish u had died again and went on somewhere else instead of the underworld with Zoloff.

6 comments:

Shaunda said...

Mimi I like the goddess that you pick who is humble and forgiving and makes everything better to.

kyle said...

i thought it was really good mimi but i think you can put more time into it and think more

Tanner said...

hehheh... zoloff... good job mimi! its epic.

jesus v said...

i really like how you came up with the names of the characters and its was alright but next time can u add sentences so i know were it ends

alex L. said...

it seems like it was stopped sort it sounds like you have a good story going though. i especially like the description of Zoloff. thank you for writing this story

Dusty said...

Good job Mimi. I like this, it seems as though you took your time and you did very well. :)