I am one, the one who went wrong the one who has one last chance one last chance to get straightened out
the one who feels bad for the ones that I had lied to
I , me ,my last chance there’s not another one for me
my next stop is D/T for me no more chances, explanations for me
I have to straighten up or get locked up
for me there’s two choices give up or straighten up
keep trying no not trying I’m gonna start doing
no more messing around
only no more doing to get by ,
I’m gonna be the best me
9 comments:
i like your poem because to me it seems like you see where your life will be headed depending on trhe choice you choose to make. It seems like you understand that you have to change your ways and that you're willing to make that sarcifce. I like how you put a positive spin at the end.
im the same way i almost got in a fight this morning but i remembered if i get in trouble again im screwed
thats a cool poem. good job on it. i like how much the title ties in with the poem.
its a good poem because thats how most people want to be i wish i never went
i think that you are on the right track and it give a view of how you are doing and that is really good.....keep your head up because your doing good
I think that is a very mature view on things. You are taking responsibility for your actions. You are probably one of the very few in the system who have this view.
Hey Damian, What up I think that your poem was way good. It is important to finally come to the conclusion that life is only worth living if you can live with yourself, and be the best you, because you are stuck with you. thanks for the extra reminder that being the best you is for the better.
Hey Damian, What up I think that your poem was way good. It is important to finally come to the conclusion that life is only worth living if you can live with yourself, and be the best you, because you are stuck with you. thanks for the extra reminder that being the best you is for the better.
Lifes pretty hard, theres so many peer presure everwhere you go. its not easy,but if you beleive in your self and stop ur negative thinking youll help yourself grow mentally as well. ive taken alot f thing for granit and at the end of my string im regretting all the stuff i choice wrong in life. sometime i get to the point where im not caring but i always find a way back into the road that'll lead me to what im really looking for ey.
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