I live in a democracy
Where the democrat side is a dominating dynasty
With a blow of dynamite but free like a liberty of love
In a philosophy
A philosophy on a drive to pulsate like a spirit
A spirit on a warm spring day with a warm breeze
In the night of sympathy in a vital formation of loves philosophy
Trying to contact like a tractor in a liberal aristocracy
Waiting for the end in a vital tribute
Adding to life like an addiction to a vitamin
Confidentially at work trying to transform
5 comments:
I told Leslie that i think that it was very creative for you to use our vocab words for a poem. I think that you put your poem in a way that makes since to people and flows well. I think tjhat if you write another poem you should try to do it in a stansa because it would be a little bit more chanllenging for you.
Good job! I really like the first two lines. They are very true. And you rhymed really good with them.
yeah you made a lot of rhymes and made things work together. i also agree that you should do stanza for the challenge.
i like how u used the words to make a poem that all ties together
i like the fact that you used root words thats awsome and smart i wouldnt be able to that off. good job
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