I think that Melinda realizes that her friendship with Heather wasn’t really that good like she thought it was. I think Melinda was really sad when heather said that because now she doesn’t have anyone to hang out with and she doesn’t have a best friend to talk to or anything. Now that Heather said that their friendship is over and that they cant be friends no more it made Melinda realize that she really does want to be friends with heather and that she doesn’t want their friendship to be over. It makes her feel all sad and depressed and lonely because heather ditched her for the Martha’s and that made her feel like she wasn’t part of anything. It made her feel unwanted. It got her so depressed that she had to go and cry bout it in her lil closet. I think that Heather felt great full because Melinda didn’t fuss about it or do anything and she just let her go away from the table without anything being said. It made her feel good about Melinda that is why she wrote a valentines note to Melinda saying thank you for being so understanding bout it and being so calm bout it also.
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I don't really agree with you that she didn't think that the relationship that she had was really good. I think that she realized she lost a chance to have a really good friend. I think that this was really well written, but I also think that you could look a little deeper into the book. :)
i agree that melinda did feel really sad when heather said she didnt want to be friends anymore because she really doesnt have friends
I never thought about it the way you described it but now I finally understand what the note from Heather really meant. I think that you could work on your grammar so you can get a better score. Overall very good though.
I disagree with you becuase there is way more to the story and there is so much more. Melinda I think relizes that her friend ship with Heather is important.
i think that heather broke the freinship with melinda because she wanted a freind who was so involve in so many activities and with the situation that melinda was in she coul not have fun but i agree it was sad that heather just dumped her and made her feel like sha was not a part of anything. im sure that if heather knew what happened to melinda she would of have never done what she did.
i agree that melinda did feel really sad when heather said she didnt want to be friends anymore because she really doesnt have friends
Honestly i think Melinda's and Heathers was wasn't important because Melinda has no friends so having heather gave her something to look forward to at school so i do agree with you good job.
Good job, good grammar and flow.
Keep it up.
I agree with just about you and everyone ells because she was really sad about not been friends with her anymore but things happens for a reason
Alfredo S Gtz
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