The book speak is pretty interesting its about some girl name Melinda. The book is mostly about her life in High School, how she goes through humiliation because of her actions. Melinda has experience a horrible life experience, she has been raped on a party. At the party there was a lot of students from her school, so after she got raped she call the police. Many people at the party got arrested and everyone blamed Melinda without knowing what happen to her. Melinda has no one to talk to, her parents work all day, she try’s to avoid people at her school, she is a very quiet person. As Melinda continues to go to high school she meets a girl named Heather. Heather and Melinda becomes friends, Heather invites Melinda to come to a pep rally, Melinda really didn’t want to go but she went anyways. At the pep rally some girl they bumped into, One of those girls brother was at the party where the cops went to. Melinda didn’t know what to tell them, they didn’t what really happen to her and why she called the cops. Many of the time when Melinda is anxious she bites her lips till she starts bleeding. I think that the means that she feels like talking to someone but she doesn’t she keeps it to her self….
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Good job on extensive detail. I like how you worded your passage so that the reader knew what was going on. Use more choice of words i got lost in the end when you were trying to explain the prep rally incident. Great way on expressing your feelings and point of view on the book in the end.
I agree with you for sure. I think that she is afraid to tell someone. I think that she is hurt and she doesn't want to have to explain herself. Quiet people learn a lot more than the loud and obnoxious. Being quiet is a good thing though.
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i agree the book is about her going through high school and faceing a bunch of problems
i think youre right. i agree wth you. many times has she been humiliated by every one in front of every one. i feel bad for her alot of girls have been in her possition and it is important for most to speak but how can we when noone will listen.
i really can't reaf this the parts i can read are alright next time make it bigger
I somewhat agree with you but there's not much to agree with what I mean is that you didn't really say much you really just explained the book. But other than that I agree that Melinda is scared to tell anybody what really happened I think that it is hard.
Try making paragraphs to organize your writing so it looks more professional. Also, the font looks good, but for some of us it's hard to read. Other than that, good job.
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