Melinda physical state reflects on her mental state because she’s always sad or depressed. Her mental state is very depressing she’s always talking to herself on her mind. Most of Melinda’s physical actions shows that she is sad, depressed, and mad. I think Melinda is scared of what people think of her or about what happen to her. She also expresses a lot of pain on most of her art class, for example the one tree she drew getting hit by lighting. One of her action that I think she shows pain is the one part were she looks at herself in t he mirror and she bites her lips and starts bleeding. Melinda is going through a lot pain on her mind cause she’s got no one to talk too, her parents are always working. Melinda fainted on her science class cause she was having flash backs from when she got raped. Like when they open the frogs legs she remember how it happen to her, so she got really scared and nervous. Melinda has gone through a lot of things in school and at home. Melinda isn’t really an open person, she keeps most of her thoughts on her head.
7 comments:
wow bro i can somewhat agree to how you feel man but the matter of the post is to be more intulectual with your words not sayen its melinda thug life
she does think a lot and keeps all she thinks in her head and she is so scarred for life but she is still a great and beautiful girl
Okay I don't know if you got the blog that I sent you, but just in case: here it is again... Nice job. I think that you look at this way more maturely than most kids, I respect you for that. I think that it is cool how you can see more than just what she says, and that you can see that she is hurt. Its cool how you can see the pain that she has been through.
i agree she is always sad or depressed
Work on trying to be professional on your spelling and grammar. You should also organize your paragraphs a little more. Good job thow on this
You used a lot of on when you should have used in. But other than that you did great. You Also could have explained one subject instead of elaborating on a whole bunch of subjects. I think that one good thing you put in this assignment was that you described different subjects in how Melinda experienced pain.
It was good but the only thing that i didn't really liked was that you named your blog Melinda's thug life but either way it was good. Good job
Alfredo S Gtz
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