Friday, April 8, 2011

Speak


The thing that I m righting about is that the drawing that Melinda drew in her art class from what I got from the tree being struck by lighting was when she was hurt really badly and caused lots of problems to her and some thing you can not heal for ever. She is hurt and of her past experience with other people not trusting them. It says that she was hurt. And will never be able to heal or trust from the pain that has a damaged a tree is her self and the way she lives a tree is healthy till some thing happens like the tree getting cut down or burned butt I under stand how she was a tree and was struck by lighting she got hurt when I mean hurt. She went to a party and was raped and she called the cops so lots of people don’t want to talk to her. So for example I was a tree at once butt I was not in that situation one thing that happen to me was I witness my cousin get shot in a chest at a party and I do fill guilty even dew it was not my fault and I have not told other people about that butt I do feel bad and lots of my family blame me for that one night and to what happen to my cousin so there’s things in our life the we can never be heal butt we just have to learn to cope with those things even though we can not get over that’s what makes us stronger in life. and I see why she does not tell any body its some thing very uncomfortable to some people to talk about so its so thought to deal with things like that.

2 comments:

jesus v said...

great job this is really great no errors i like how u wrote it

Dezir e said...

I agree with you when you say she's been hurt in the past and it's really hard for her to trust people. That's kinda like me it's hard to trust people. If you know what I mean :) I'm sorry about your cousin.