Once upon a time, there was a god named Captain Lester he was the god of dragons. He created dragons and made them take the humans as their slaves and have them build a bunch of temples and statues to worship him until one day Captain Lester decided he wanted to bare a child so he went down to earth and married a woman named Keylala and she had a daughter named Bacca and Captain Lester took her up into the heavens in which he lived but what he did not realize was that Keylala actually had twins and she had a boy named Grauzul well Grauzul grew up to be a big man as big as he could possibly be.
Keylala then gave Grauzul a sword and said you need to kill one of those dragons so you can make a more powerful hatchet so he set off on his journey he traveled for weeks until he came upon a dragons cave and he called out the mighty dragon and when the dragon came out it was huge it was big black and his talons shinned of a silver tint and Grauzul said to himself this is the dragon I must kill his talons will work great to make my hatchet so he stepped forth and said die you beastly thing and they fought for a couple of days until finally he jumped up and sliced the dragons head off of its shoulders.
Grauzul went back to his mother and he made the hatchet he worked for days and days on it and it came out beautiful it was big black and very sharp is was perfect for a warrior of his nature. So from there he set off to the heavens where his dad was but he had forgotten about his sister Bacca and she was waiting for him but she was week so he chopped her head off her shoulders then he ran into his dads throne room and they fought for years until finally Grauzul weekend him and said I can either kill you now or you can give me all your godness and ill let you go she Captain Lester said ok you win I,m done. Then Grauzul took control and ordered the dragons to stop making them slaves so they listened and all mankind praised him and the dragons and the humans lived in peace till today but if ever something to go wrong Grauzul the all mighty is still waiting and as powerful as ever to chop off their heads and have fun with his hatchets.
6 comments:
Kyle,
Alright good job man. It was like I was sort of… how do you say it…. In a fairytale you could say. It was interesting to read. You have the capability to write some really good things if you practice. I mean I write constantly but I can’t make something up right on the spot and it takes me a long time to write even a short story. It doesn’t seem that way for you. Try writing things more like this you let people see a different part of you.
very weird I didn't really like it.
It was funny though all the heads being cut off it was cool.
I think that you used the supreme power of awesomeness.
This was really good. I like it. I think you thought about it for a while.
good job
good job... i really like the way you think with drangons and all the type of stuff is very interesting to read...your story bought my attention i enjoy reading you story this myth was different from the others..
nice one were did u come up with this and ur the only thta i notice didnt use it all started in complete darkness honesty it gets annyoning after a while but still u did a awsome job great think out of the box keep it up . thre were no errors to my eye
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