Friday, March 11, 2011

A Walk in the Dark

As I walk in the dark, I see a bright spark. A part of me told me to go but I didn’t want to so I just said no. Then I saw someone walking towards me. I said to myself, please don’t hurt me. I turn around and sway, so I can get away. I fell a weird breeze and then I hear “Freeze”, so I just stood there hoping I wouldn’t get hurt. I hear a weird noise but it turns out to be a persons voice. The person comes to me saying “Cant you see, your not supposed to be her? not yet at least”. This person was a girl with beautiful long hair who lifted up the air and made it seem so perfect. I say to myself “what is wrong with this place? Am I invading there space?” why can’t I be here? “Come with me, then you will see.” She says to me. “BAMB” I get hit
On the head and black out. When I wake up, I’m back where I started, but with a horrid smell like someone sharted. I don’t know what happened and I don’t know why, but all I knew is that I had to say good-bye. I left, not knowing what had happened that day. Ever since that night I’ve been to scared to ever go out again. I would never take a walk in the dark, hoping I would never see that spark again.

3 comments:

Damian said...

i like this poem because it expresses a feeling of scared frightened and then releaved

nay said...

nice poem it sounds familiar just playing um i likeed alot of it how it reflects to alot on love

Tanner said...

i like it when poems or songs tell of stories through music and lyrics and this feels like a story when i read it. its cool, good job.