Muhammad Ali was known as the best boxier ever he started training to do boxing at the age of 12 because he said he was going to whoop who ever stole his bike which he received for his birthday Muhammad Ali between the ages of 18-19 he achieved one of his dreams winning an Olympic gold medal that was one of Muhammad Ali greatest moments of his life Muhammad Ali wasn’t just the greatest boxier of all time but he worked on developing integrity and live a honest life and he did this by following his dreams and doing what he thought was right by speaking out for what he believed was the right thing
Muhammad Ali was a child of two and at the age of 8 he once had all the kids in the neighborhood younger and older than him on his front porch and he was the only one talking by knowing that he could do that at the age of 8 that through out his life he is going to be a leader Muhammad Ali at the age of 8 was showing leadership skills by speaking to all the neighborhood kids then at the age of 12 he started boxing training all it took was an inspiring school principal to be always announcing him at school events as the next heavy weight champion then between the ages of 18-19 he won an Olympic gold medal before he was 20 years of age he won his light heavy weight champion ship he was also announced 3-time heavy weight champion then he was also crowned sportsman of the century Muhammad Ali athleticness he spent most his free-time training for boxing career not only did he do that but he showed leader ship in his community this subject inspired me by to think so much because he was a great leader and a great athlete
Muhammad Ali greatest achievement was becoming a heavy weight boxing champion when nobody believed that he would and his next greatest achievement was him helping out the community that he grew up and being supportive of school and education that’s how he showed it by being supportive of education and helping out his community
Muhammad Ali showed 2 examples of the creed the first one is I am working to develop integrity and live an honest life he did that by standing up for the right things the second example of the creed that he uses is this I pledge to be caring toward others and live a life of service he did that by helping his community and being caring and helping his family
There are 2 things from the creed that Muhammad Ali showed in his life one was I am working to develop integrity and live an honest life the second was I pledge to be caring towards others and live a life of service Muhammad Ali greatest achievements was becoming the heavy weight champion we should speak out more for the right things and help our community
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Hey Damian!
So i was reading your paper and i was really impresed with how you chose to organize your paragraphs. I realize that we all had the same setup in one way or another but yours still had your personality shining through it. I would try to loosen up a little in your sentences. You seem a little tense. I learned that your person won a gold medal before he was twenty. Anyways i will see you later and i love reading your things.
i think you did your spelling good in your paper. you can have better punctuation i learned that he was young and had leadership skills
you wre really good at writing the paragraphs however i think you could be more specific i never new who this person was its awsome that he can be a heavy weight champion i wish i could do that
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