My life on ecstacy was quite a fun ride
But how fun is it to smoke when you have to hide?
Everyone is stupid and the people yes I blame this is why I’m here my words I could not claim it was fun it was a trip a trip that got me here and in my family it took a rip I feel some what bad but not all the way because I’m a teenager I live day by day. I still want to do it it was oh man fun but like I said getting caught you feel dumb.
I might seem like a good kid but I still have my troubles.
3 comments:
This poem reminds me that sometimes adults really do know whats best for you even though they don't always seem like it all of the time. There really isn't a point to smoking or dungs or anthing like that if you have to hide it because you know if anyone found out then they would be disappointed in you. Everyone has slip ups but it doesn't mean your dumb or are'nt a good kid anymore.
it was good, but i think you should be more organized because i didnt know where the sentences ended. but it was creative and its something a lot of people can relate to.
i like it cuz lots of people think they are stuped for getting cought
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