Neil Armstrong had a brother and a sister younger than him. Neil Armstrong was the first man on the moon. Neil Armstrong had a great value in education, Neil Receive a degree on Aeronautical Engineer.
Neil Armstrong was born on Americas’ great depression. Neil’s first airplane ride was on a ford Tri-Motor. At the age of eight Neil Armstrong was building model airplane
out of paper and balsa wood. Neil Armstrong was part of the boys scout and achieved the highest rank in scouting. Nail Armstrong was a very intelligent person. Like many young pilots Armstrong didn’t simply want to fly the airplane he wanted to understand them inside and out. Neil Armstrong received a degree in Aeronautical Engineer. Neil Armstrong was called by the navy on active duty. After Armstrong served his time on the navy, he joined the N.A.S.A as a research pilot.
Neil Armstrong greatest achievement was that he was the first man on the moon. Neil Armstrong achieved his goal by focusing In school. Nail spend many years studying and that help him to reach his dream. To be the first man on the moon it isn’t that easy. Neil attended on a flight school in Pensacola. Neil was also called by the nvay in active duty.
Neil Armstrong creed was that he really dedicated his time on education. Armstrong in one of his period of time, he was attending a flight school were he received a degree. Going to school really help Armstrong on his career. Armstrong also learned how the airplanes function inside and out. To know how an airplane works, it really takes a lot of knowledge. It takes years of experience.
Neil Armstrong achieved his goal by being the first man on the moon. Neil Armstrong teaches us that with education you can achieve many things. Education is important to many people, because with education you can become successful. To become someone like Armstrong, takes years of study. Armstrong was a great influence to many people, he achieved many things in his life.
WORK CITTED
Jackson, Mike and Dixon, Tara. Neil Armstrong One Giant Leap for Mankind. New York; Sterling 2008.
5 comments:
great job on the middle in talking about his knowledge and hard work and serving on active duty. work on introducing your story, the beginning was rough and only told us that he had a brother and sister and flew to the moon.
i learned that he did get a degree in Aeronautic Engineer.
Nice paper. It was very well written with a lot of information that I did not know. One thing that you could do better is to not use just his name, but maybe aslo say he or something in the beginning. I learned that he had a younger brother and sister, I think its cool how he showed his younger siblings a good example to follow.
it was really good your just like me i mentioned his name like in every sentenced but its good
i think that this paper was wrote with thoughtful thinking
i think this person could have put more about Neil Armstrong childhood on in his paper
1.i really like the way he wrote his paper!!
2.one thing he can improve on is nothing.
3.one thing i learned about there paper is that neil was the first man on the moon.
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